Subject: Chapter three!
Posted on: 2022-07-28 15:50:51 UTC

This was fun to read. I’m not familiar with the canons, but I still enjoyed it.

In the passage:

”Sure, Dad ." Jasmine rolled her eyes. "No, you need to seduce a canon character."

" Jasmine !" Constance gaped at her.

(Bolded for emphasis.)

It looks like you added an extra space in both sentences.


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