Ah, thanks.

PLUG: "London, Unreal" Chapter 3 by Huinesoron on 2022-07-28 15:31:53 UTC Writing Plug Reply

In which our heroines finally get a chance to sit down, have a nice cup of tea, and catch up on the gossip. Granted, the gossip is two centuries out of date, but it's still better than walking.

London, Unreal: Chapter 3 - The Magician's Wife

Have caught up on, am enjoying so far (nm) by Tomash on 2022-08-08 00:43:55 UTC Reply
re: London, Unreal by doctorlit on 2022-07-30 12:43:42 UTC Reply

Heh. Jasmine's plan really is a decent one . . . at least it would be, if not for the fact that it can't actually work! But she has no way of knowing HQ is gone, so she earns points for formulating it all the same.

Oh, Baker Street is here! But "unseen arms" . . . maybe not Holmes's Baker Street?

Good to see the remnants of the British government are immediately cracking down on disorder with authoritarian militancy, and closing the borders to exclude foreign travel. 10/10 fellas, stay the course, I'm sure your marching drills will intimidate the Fey once they roll into town. Just have to hope Constance and Jasmine can make it out of town without anyone freaking out at their clothing, now . . .

—doctorlit, chugging the last of the milk out of the carton
Chapter three! by Linstar on 2022-07-28 15:50:51 UTC Edited Reply

This was fun to read. I’m not familiar with the canons, but I still enjoyed it.

In the passage:

”Sure, Dad ." Jasmine rolled her eyes. "No, you need to seduce a canon character."

" Jasmine !" Constance gaped at her.

(Bolded for emphasis.)

It looks like you added an extra space in both sentences.

—Ls

Ah, thanks. by Huinesoron on 2022-07-28 16:01:00 UTC Reply

Not sure what happened there, AO3's text-box is something of a mystery to me. I've fixed them (and a few others) now. :)

hS

Yeah, AO3 formatting is confusing. by Linstar on 2022-07-28 19:26:50 UTC Reply

It took me a while to figure out how to make text bold.

—Ls