Subject: I've seen apartment dwellers toss around beanbags. Easier to clean up. (nm)
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Posted on: 2022-08-25 15:57:54 UTC
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Finally, new interlude/backstory by
on 2022-08-24 12:35:01 UTC
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This time from Momo's side.
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re: backstory by
on 2022-08-30 04:04:33 UTC
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Very sweet, and very sad, but in a nice way, if that makes sense. I love how supportive Momoka's dad is! And hey: she got her wish, defeating monsters at the PPC!
—doctorlit, definitely going to bed on time, just . . . just one more thing, come on, just let me get one more thing done, that's all I need bro, one more thing and then I'll go to bed, one more thing, bro, I need it, I
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Thoughts by
on 2022-08-30 01:20:28 UTC
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- I had trouble working out what the first sentence was going for, I think you accidentally a word or something
- Yowch, that ending
Is hard to have detailed thoughts on a short piece like this, but, overall, you did a good job producing emotional impact.
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Read, it was cute. by
on 2022-08-24 13:10:53 UTC
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I like that Momo’s throwing beans.
—Ls
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Well, it's a Setsubun tradition by
on 2022-08-24 13:36:26 UTC
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The act of throwing beans (mamemaki) is meant to chase away demons and invite fortune. I'm not sure how people living in apartments, like Momo and her father here, usually work around this.
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I've seen apartment dwellers toss around beanbags. Easier to clean up. (nm) by
on 2022-08-25 15:57:54 UTC
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Um, cool. (nm) by
on 2022-08-24 17:13:06 UTC
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