re: backstory by
doctorlit
on 2022-08-30 04:04:33 UTC
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Very sweet, and very sad, but in a nice way, if that makes sense. I love how supportive Momoka's dad is! And hey: she got her wish, defeating monsters at the PPC!
—doctorlit, definitely going to bed on time, just . . . just one more thing, come on, just let me get one more thing done, that's all I need bro, one more thing and then I'll go to bed, one more thing, bro, I need it, I
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Tomash
on 2022-08-30 01:20:28 UTC
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- I had trouble working out what the first sentence was going for, I think you accidentally a word or something
- Yowch, that ending
Is hard to have detailed thoughts on a short piece like this, but, overall, you did a good job producing emotional impact.
Read, it was cute. by
Linstar
on 2022-08-24 13:10:53 UTC
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I like that Momo’s throwing beans.
—Ls