This is quite an interesting read! We're so used to mission elements, like temporal distortion and lack of description, being talked about in the familiar terms that the PPC uses. But seeing those things get described from the point of view of a character unfamiliar with the tropes and details really sheds a new light on how bizarre missions can get, and how almost cosmic horror-esque some of the word manifestations can be. Fogg is a fun character, a perfect blend of unreliable narrator and narrator who honestly doesn't realize how tacky he is. The recruitment occurred unusually fast, even by the PPC's standards, but I understand such a short story couldn't dwell too long on introductions, plus, it's just a lot funnier this way. I was also amused by the date headings: how the numerical date advances, but the days of the week go wildly off-kilter.

Some maybe errors?
And so it was dear readers, that I find myself upon my birthday setting down to paper the start of a brand new journal.
This sentence contains two tenses!

. . . or when I was worshipped by a god in the Carpathian mountains?
Not sure if this is a mistake or an intentional subversion of the more usual "worshipped as a god." Just wanted to check!

We had been transported into a badfic, a canon world prevented by terrible writing . . .
I don't think that's the word you wanted . . .

That was the point Toni realised that he hadn't been the showers only occupant.
The pronoun gender got swapped, and "shower's" is missing the apostrophe.

As the door closed behind me I did here the woman chastise someone called Wallis for dripping all over the carpet and I wondered if perhaps that was the Ewoks name.
"Ewok's" is missing the apostrophe, and that should be "hear" rather than "here."

—doctorlit had a very fun day tubing down salt river with coworkers, but he is very tired and on his way to a crash soon

Fogg's character is quite amusing and shines through well. It's kinda interesting that there's no badfic text. How are the agents communicating if Fogg doesn't speak Ewok? Wouldn't they give him a Universal Translator? And did you just canonize my theory of Lux's RC? Not sure how to feel about that...

However, there were a few issues I saw.

And so it was dear readers that I find myself upon my birthday setting down to paper the start of a brand new journal.

Needs a comma after "readers".

Who could possibly have missed out the time I married Queen Victoria, or my years time travelling aboard my Nautilus Zeppelin.

Needs a question mark.

With catlike agility I rolled off the desk and, once I had managed to get back to my feet I found myself standing face to flower with the weird creature.

Needs commas after "desk" and "feet".

And for Origins sake find him some clothes.

Needs comma, "Origin's sake".

Everyone we passed seemed to be wearing the same drab jumpsuits, or some variation thereof. How can somebody flounce effectively without a velvet frock coat?

I'm pretty sure that Headquarters doesn't have a that much of a dress code. Essentially, all you need is a flashpatch.

...her gorgeous hair seeming to have a life of it's own...

Wrong "its".

reading Ewok expressions is not my fortè.

There's no accent on "forte".

I realise many of my readers do prefer that I keep these journals at least relatively PG13,

PG-13.

--Ls