This is VERY cute! by
Damian Brighte
on 2022-11-22 20:35:50 UTC
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The short length really helps, and the kids' conversation whirlwinding into words that sound like "distraction" feels like Classic Kid Stuff. I got a strong sense of everyone's personalities, and I like it!
re: Casefile by
doctorlit
on 2022-11-22 12:31:34 UTC
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Cute and clever! I love how each child shows some tell that they participated. Also, amused that Constance definitely knew beforehand and clearly didn't care that much in the first place! Also, kids emulating the canons they're learning is peak PPC—and peak real life, come to think of it!
—doctorlit, eater of clearance cookies from Walmart
That story had everything. by
Ekwy
on 2022-11-19 14:44:11 UTC
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Mystery. Deception. Intrigue. Kids being adorable. Cookies. A satisfying ending reminiscent of a certain Christie plot.
Ten outta ten, no notes.
Awww! by
Thoth
on 2022-11-18 21:57:58 UTC
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That's just adorable. And quite funny.
Ah, I saw the New Cal one! by
Linstar
on 2022-11-18 21:41:17 UTC
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Somehow I managed to catch the ao3 version before its official posting.
I’ll get to the investigation one Soon©️.
—Ls