Subject: I haven't even read much of the fic, but the premise is weird, uncanonical and impossible.
Posted on: 2023-01-12 23:17:53 UTC

Star and Serpent

I have only read the first two chapters, but it's already looking iffy. Ramandu falls in love with a sea serpent named Myanweth. I don't think Narnian sea serpents are sentient like that, and why would one fall in love with a Star? I will admit that I don't know the explanation of the origins of Ramandu's daughter, but this seems implausible. Also, this fic seems to be turning her into a Sue.

(Edit: I bumped the Beta Request button instead of the Badfic Report button. Oops.)

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