Subject: re: mission
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Posted on: 2024-12-30 18:35:59 UTC

That opening paragraph is beautiful! You have some wonderful descriptions in this story, including when the canon character and Suvian get trapped in the “snowman suits!”

It’s honestly kind of cool that you gave Arare a full “villain moment” here. I had an inkling, after the last story, that he was going to do something under-handed to the four agents, but I assumed they were going to thwart him in the end. But things went the complete opposite direction! I love how Arare interpreted all their fears and condensed them into a single theme he was able to exploit. And seeing him take on a full human form (that picture is cool, no pun intended!) and proceed to return to HQ with greater power, is a real fun twist! I’m looking forward to seeing what Arare plans in the future.

—doctorlit, readying for a busy morning tomorrow

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