It's 20,000 words but only one chapter. Suspicious already, and then you discover that he put ther whole story - which is multiple chapters - into a single chapter.

And he still had the gall to MARK each chapter.

Half of it is bad grammar and bad plot, a fourth of it is a villain Stu with a really dumb name, and the other fourth is run-on sentences.

I've been running an MST of it for a while now, since there's plenty to say of it.

The story summary... How can a story be both canon AND non-canon?

It's painful to read. The run-on sentences do not seem to be intentional, because even the Author's Notes seem to have them.

Imagine a person trying to narrate that. Even with the pauses in between due to the commas, they will still run out of breath quickly.