Subject: New Mission!
Author:
Posted on: 2012-02-20 01:29:00 UTC
In which Tera and Ari discover the joys of character derailment.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gvOo7Q6vQAjYjf-NugV7vI_lIq5ic84kHu4tmoPd77o/edit
Rating: T
Canon: Nanoha
Fic: Saigo no Tanjoobi
Well done! You did a much better job at explaining the relationships between the canon characters this time. (Although I still wouldn't mind some more info on the canon. Any interest in making a wiki page for Nanoha?)
One error I noticed:
"As the emerged into the Pre-Fic space . . ."
should be, "As they emerged . . ."
Ah, thank you. I've been meaning to make a wiki page, but I'm lazy...I'll try to get around to it in March, when I'll have a lot more free time.
Had a good laugh seeing Tera freak out when dealing with "her" human anatomy. And that rolling period was a grat idea too.
Loot:
A small vial of Nitrogen-Sodium compound (now in some DoSAT lab)
A black period, about the size of a basketball, that, when you hold it, makes you end every sentence with a period.
Eight knives, four labelled fear, four labelled jealousy
Minis:
Fate chan
Fate POV
Nanoha POV
Yunno
And Teana Lanstar, from the last mission, is still up for adoption.
Corolla would love them.
I suggest you to keep the period as a trophy, or send it to the Department of Technical Errors for analysis. (Also, I think the Nitrogen-Sodium compound will stay in DoSAT, su putting it in the loot list isn't useful, as it is for loot that can be claimed by fellow Agents.)
Oh, I thought the loot lists were just for stuff you got from the mission. The knives aren't up for grabs right now, sorry (Although, if we do a crossover on something, I will gladly give them to you)
So, to be a little clearer:
Nothing on the loot list is claimable right now, sorry. However, those minis need a warm and loving home.