Subject: Can I have one fear and one jealousy?
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Posted on: 2012-02-20 11:26:00 UTC
Corolla would love them.
I suggest you to keep the period as a trophy, or send it to the Department of Technical Errors for analysis. (Also, I think the Nitrogen-Sodium compound will stay in DoSAT, su putting it in the loot list isn't useful, as it is for loot that can be claimed by fellow Agents.)
In which Tera and Ari discover the joys of character derailment.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gvOo7Q6vQAjYjf-NugV7vI_lIq5ic84kHu4tmoPd77o/edit
Rating: T
Canon: Nanoha
Fic: Saigo no Tanjoobi
Well done! You did a much better job at explaining the relationships between the canon characters this time. (Although I still wouldn't mind some more info on the canon. Any interest in making a wiki page for Nanoha?)
One error I noticed:
"As the emerged into the Pre-Fic space . . ."
should be, "As they emerged . . ."
Ah, thank you. I've been meaning to make a wiki page, but I'm lazy...I'll try to get around to it in March, when I'll have a lot more free time.
Had a good laugh seeing Tera freak out when dealing with "her" human anatomy. And that rolling period was a grat idea too.
Loot:
A small vial of Nitrogen-Sodium compound (now in some DoSAT lab)
A black period, about the size of a basketball, that, when you hold it, makes you end every sentence with a period.
Eight knives, four labelled fear, four labelled jealousy
Minis:
Fate chan
Fate POV
Nanoha POV
Yunno
And Teana Lanstar, from the last mission, is still up for adoption.
Corolla would love them.
I suggest you to keep the period as a trophy, or send it to the Department of Technical Errors for analysis. (Also, I think the Nitrogen-Sodium compound will stay in DoSAT, su putting it in the loot list isn't useful, as it is for loot that can be claimed by fellow Agents.)
Oh, I thought the loot lists were just for stuff you got from the mission. The knives aren't up for grabs right now, sorry (Although, if we do a crossover on something, I will gladly give them to you)
So, to be a little clearer:
Nothing on the loot list is claimable right now, sorry. However, those minis need a warm and loving home.