Subject: Re: Prequel mission.
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Posted on: 2011-10-23 03:21:00 UTC
Nice! I don't know anything about Danny Phantom, but the mission was a good one - and I always like missions with Luxury. They're always so... interesting. Good job :)
Another thing finished. Another wraith slain.
This mission's set before everything else in my spin-off.
http://rmforum.rm.funpic.de/ppc/template.php?rc=Origins&title=A+Gay+Old+Time&src=nathan_prequel.ppc>Mission
http://rmforum.rm.funpic.de/ppc/>Website
Also, I'm now using php. If you notice anything being off with the mission pages, tell me.
Why was Nathan suspended from duty?
Otherwise, great job!
I'm not going to flatout tell you that.
But I'm giving hints in that mission. Read closer.
Does it have something to do with portals? Maybe something went wrong, he lost a partner due to a bad portal?
So, I take it the reason behind his suspension hasn't been revealed yet.
Nice! I don't know anything about Danny Phantom, but the mission was a good one - and I always like missions with Luxury. They're always so... interesting. Good job :)
Danny Phantom's been coming up quite a bit lately! It's nice to see a good cartoon I'm familiar with getting some attention. (The title of the mission made me think it was going to be a Flintstones mission, which would have been even squickier for me.) This badfic was pretty insulting, changing around characters' sexualities like that, and without any thought put into it at all.
I saw a few typos:
*Just before Nathan and Luxury leave, Lux "tagged" at Nathan's arm instead of "tugged."
*Just before Clockwork leaves, the agents "watched Clockwork returning th them."
*During the exorcism, Nathan slapped the dummy "onto" the head, instead of just "on" its head.
...being all giddy over the new mission and promptly failing simple html again.
Website: http://rmforum.rm.funpic.de/ppc/
Mission: http://rmforum.rm.funpic.de/ppc/template.php?rc=Origins&title=A+Gay+Old+Time&src=nathan_prequel.ppc
This time I tested it.
Failing simple html is something that happens to all of us. ^^
Anyway, I really liked the mission. Luxury was super funny and very, well, Luxury. And I loved the expression 'costume porn'. I'll consider stealing it for the mission I'm doing right now.