Subject: Sorry, wrong spot. (nm)
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Posted on: 2011-10-23 03:35:00 UTC
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Prequel mission. by
on 2011-10-23 01:06:00 UTC
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Another thing finished. Another wraith slain.
This mission's set before everything else in my spin-off.
http://rmforum.rm.funpic.de/ppc/template.php?rc=Origins&title=A+Gay+Old+Time&src=nathan_prequel.ppc>Mission
http://rmforum.rm.funpic.de/ppc/>Website
Also, I'm now using php. If you notice anything being off with the mission pages, tell me. -
Question! by
on 2011-10-23 16:52:00 UTC
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Why was Nathan suspended from duty?
Otherwise, great job! -
Because... by
on 2011-10-23 17:34:00 UTC
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I'm not going to flatout tell you that.
But I'm giving hints in that mission. Read closer. -
Does it... by
on 2011-10-23 18:57:00 UTC
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Does it have something to do with portals? Maybe something went wrong, he lost a partner due to a bad portal?
So, I take it the reason behind his suspension hasn't been revealed yet. -
Re: Prequel mission. by
on 2011-10-23 03:21:00 UTC
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Nice! I don't know anything about Danny Phantom, but the mission was a good one - and I always like missions with Luxury. They're always so... interesting. Good job :)
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Re: Mission by
on 2011-10-23 03:35:00 UTC
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Danny Phantom's been coming up quite a bit lately! It's nice to see a good cartoon I'm familiar with getting some attention. (The title of the mission made me think it was going to be a Flintstones mission, which would have been even squickier for me.) This badfic was pretty insulting, changing around characters' sexualities like that, and without any thought put into it at all.
I saw a few typos:
*Just before Nathan and Luxury leave, Lux "tagged" at Nathan's arm instead of "tugged."
*Just before Clockwork leaves, the agents "watched Clockwork returning th them."
*During the exorcism, Nathan slapped the dummy "onto" the head, instead of just "on" its head. -
And thou shalt recieve credit. (nm) by
on 2011-10-23 16:35:00 UTC
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Sorry, wrong spot. (nm) by
on 2011-10-23 03:35:00 UTC
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There I go again... by
on 2011-10-23 01:27:00 UTC
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...being all giddy over the new mission and promptly failing simple html again.
Website: http://rmforum.rm.funpic.de/ppc/
Mission: http://rmforum.rm.funpic.de/ppc/template.php?rc=Origins&title=A+Gay+Old+Time&src=nathan_prequel.ppc
This time I tested it. -
Re: There I go again... by
on 2011-10-23 08:49:00 UTC
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Failing simple html is something that happens to all of us. ^^
Anyway, I really liked the mission. Luxury was super funny and very, well, Luxury. And I loved the expression 'costume porn'. I'll consider stealing it for the mission I'm doing right now. -
The links don't seem to be working. (nm) by
on 2011-10-23 01:20:00 UTC
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Both links are 404's. (nm) by
on 2011-10-23 01:20:00 UTC
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