Subject: Thanks!@
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Posted on: 2011-10-03 20:11:00 UTC
Yeah, it was fun coming up with a new variety of Sue-Wraith. The Sue's past was just so needlessly angsty that it kind of demanded a new wraith, really.
Thanks! *has a small sip of bleepka*
In which Anneli gets extremely annoyed at a Mary Sue, and all three agents discover a new subtype of Sue-wraith.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15MlBbwW5WoU-XlZZX-1yvau-Q8mGm1sMGgeiJuJm0yI/edit?hl=en_US#
Seriously, this was a really bad Sue right here. But I had fun sporking the hell out of her, so crazy times are had.
Anyway, this mission gave us three minis:
Citidal
Kaiden
Kelley
Hope you guys enjoyed it, and please leave comments! :D
I loved it! Especially the mile-long charge list. :D
And your new team is working out really well. In your last mission I loved Anneli's reaction, when she found out that Xanthus watch MLP, because that was the excact reaction I had, when I found out the same about one of my friends.
I found two minor nitpicks near the end:
“And now that’s one less Sue wondering the multiverse,” said Anneli.
and
“And now that’s one less Sue wondering the multiverse,” said Anneli.
No, Anneli did not say the same thing twice. What she actually said the second time around was:
“They all think they’re so cool when they do things that would make most women wouldn’t really like.”
I look forwards to many missions to follow.
I like the new type of Sue-Wraith, good on you for doing something different! ^^
And the Sue herself... o0. Definitely the worst SI I've seen in a while, have some bleepka on me! :P
Yeah, it was fun coming up with a new variety of Sue-Wraith. The Sue's past was just so needlessly angsty that it kind of demanded a new wraith, really.
Thanks! *has a small sip of bleepka*
Wow... this Sue rubs me all the wrong ways, seriously, thanks for taking care of her...
You're welcome.
As Sues go, that's *terrible*. Good on you for sporking it. I have to admit, I totally sympathise with Anneli- I wanted to kill her so much. Great job.