Subject: Thanks!
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Posted on: 2011-10-03 14:40:00 UTC
Yeah, she's one of the most egregious SI Sues I have ever seen. So yeah, it went to the top of my sporking list pretty fast.
Thanks! :D
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New Floaters Mission! by
on 2011-10-02 20:17:00 UTC
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In which Anneli gets extremely annoyed at a Mary Sue, and all three agents discover a new subtype of Sue-wraith.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15MlBbwW5WoU-XlZZX-1yvau-Q8mGm1sMGgeiJuJm0yI/edit?hl=en_US#
Seriously, this was a really bad Sue right here. But I had fun sporking the hell out of her, so crazy times are had.
Anyway, this mission gave us three minis:
Citidal
Kaiden
Kelley
Hope you guys enjoyed it, and please leave comments! :D -
Yay! by
on 2011-10-05 09:24:00 UTC
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I loved it! Especially the mile-long charge list. :D
And your new team is working out really well. In your last mission I loved Anneli's reaction, when she found out that Xanthus watch MLP, because that was the excact reaction I had, when I found out the same about one of my friends.
I found two minor nitpicks near the end:
“And now that’s one less Sue wondering the multiverse,” said Anneli.
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“And now that’s one less Sue wondering the multiverse,” said Anneli. -
*facepalm* by
on 2011-10-05 09:30:00 UTC
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No, Anneli did not say the same thing twice. What she actually said the second time around was:
“They all think they’re so cool when they do things that would make most women wouldn’t really like.” -
I'm liking this new team. by
on 2011-10-04 18:02:00 UTC
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I look forwards to many missions to follow.
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Awesome! by
on 2011-10-03 19:16:00 UTC
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I like the new type of Sue-Wraith, good on you for doing something different! ^^
And the Sue herself... o0. Definitely the worst SI I've seen in a while, have some bleepka on me! :P -
Thanks!@ by
on 2011-10-03 20:11:00 UTC
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Yeah, it was fun coming up with a new variety of Sue-Wraith. The Sue's past was just so needlessly angsty that it kind of demanded a new wraith, really.
Thanks! *has a small sip of bleepka* -
*Twitch* by
on 2011-10-03 15:12:00 UTC
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Wow... this Sue rubs me all the wrong ways, seriously, thanks for taking care of her...
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Yeah, she rubbed me wrong too. by
on 2011-10-03 15:59:00 UTC
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You're welcome.
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Re: New Floaters Mission! by
on 2011-10-03 09:45:00 UTC
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As Sues go, that's *terrible*. Good on you for sporking it. I have to admit, I totally sympathise with Anneli- I wanted to kill her so much. Great job.