Very nice! by
Myrtle Tamlane
on 2011-08-02 19:02:00 UTC
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I am also familiar with the fun/boring/frustrating wait times for chemical experiments (that's when I usually write).
Could you put the link up on the wiki?
Whatever that was, I liked it. by
Aeidhryn
on 2011-08-02 14:53:00 UTC
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Though honestly I can't tell one Flower or Agent from another... I haven't read your stuff in forever... so I'm kind of confused.
*epic cheers* by
Cassie Cameron-Young
on 2011-08-01 08:11:00 UTC
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I love it! Awesome work, hS!
(Also, I may have nearly cried a bit. But that doesn't make it less awesome.)
Very nice. by
Vixenmage
on 2011-08-01 02:51:00 UTC
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I don't have any serious critique, but in the end of Chapter Five, you've a minor typo: 'technicial' for 'technician,' unless I miss my guess.
Very well done, as always. I'll have to reread Reorganisation and Crashing Down, it's been far too long.
wow by
kitsune106
on 2011-07-31 22:16:00 UTC
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it's good. Congrats hS. I'm impressed. Nice story work there.
Interesting by
gaijinguy
on 2011-07-31 19:40:00 UTC
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This is a prequel, I take it?