Subject: Very nice.
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Posted on: 2011-08-01 02:51:00 UTC
I don't have any serious critique, but in the end of Chapter Five, you've a minor typo: 'technicial' for 'technician,' unless I miss my guess.
Very well done, as always. I'll have to reread Reorganisation and Crashing Down, it's been far too long.
This is the one I said I'd never actually write. I reckoned without a week of long shifts and no work. Yes, this was written in a single week, while waiting for sample to analyse (using chemistry, don'cha'know).
Ladies, gentlemen and assorted organisms, I am proud to present...
Lofty Skies
Yes, unlike my performance on the Reorganisation and Crashing Down, I'm presenting this one as complete from the very start.
Uh... enjoy?
hS
I am also familiar with the fun/boring/frustrating wait times for chemical experiments (that's when I usually write).
Could you put the link up on the wiki?
Though honestly I can't tell one Flower or Agent from another... I haven't read your stuff in forever... so I'm kind of confused.
I love it! Awesome work, hS!
(Also, I may have nearly cried a bit. But that doesn't make it less awesome.)
*scurries off to read*
I don't have any serious critique, but in the end of Chapter Five, you've a minor typo: 'technicial' for 'technician,' unless I miss my guess.
Very well done, as always. I'll have to reread Reorganisation and Crashing Down, it's been far too long.
it's good. Congrats hS. I'm impressed. Nice story work there.
This is a prequel, I take it?
It takes place in 1992, whereas The Reorganisation takes place in 1999.
hS