Subject: wow
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Posted on: 2011-07-31 22:16:00 UTC
it's good. Congrats hS. I'm impressed. Nice story work there.
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Epic-scale PLUG! by
on 2011-07-31 18:50:00 UTC
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This is the one I said I'd never actually write. I reckoned without a week of long shifts and no work. Yes, this was written in a single week, while waiting for sample to analyse (using chemistry, don'cha'know).
Ladies, gentlemen and assorted organisms, I am proud to present...
Lofty Skies
Yes, unlike my performance on the Reorganisation and Crashing Down, I'm presenting this one as complete from the very start.
Uh... enjoy?
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Very nice! by
on 2011-08-02 19:02:00 UTC
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I am also familiar with the fun/boring/frustrating wait times for chemical experiments (that's when I usually write).
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Whatever that was, I liked it. by
on 2011-08-02 14:53:00 UTC
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Though honestly I can't tell one Flower or Agent from another... I haven't read your stuff in forever... so I'm kind of confused.
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*epic cheers* by
on 2011-08-01 08:11:00 UTC
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I love it! Awesome work, hS!
(Also, I may have nearly cried a bit. But that doesn't make it less awesome.) -
Wow, cheers! by
on 2011-08-01 05:23:00 UTC
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*scurries off to read*
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Very nice. by
on 2011-08-01 02:51:00 UTC
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I don't have any serious critique, but in the end of Chapter Five, you've a minor typo: 'technicial' for 'technician,' unless I miss my guess.
Very well done, as always. I'll have to reread Reorganisation and Crashing Down, it's been far too long. -
wow by
on 2011-07-31 22:16:00 UTC
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it's good. Congrats hS. I'm impressed. Nice story work there.
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Interesting by
on 2011-07-31 19:40:00 UTC
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This is a prequel, I take it?
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It is. by
on 2011-07-31 20:08:00 UTC
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It takes place in 1992, whereas The Reorganisation takes place in 1999.
hS