Subject: Mm, cookie. *omnom*
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Posted on: 2011-06-17 14:57:00 UTC

Thanks for that, I was worried. {= ) *hugs*

As far as carrying on with what works, the horse seems to have left the barn, so I think I'll carry on trying to improve. For instance, I never knew what Jay and Acacia actually said regarding permission—I got here just after Jay left, I think—so if that's a quote (or near paraphrase, even) I'd like to incorporate it into whatever rewriting happens.

Also for instance. Capitalizing "permission." It's a simple little thing, and I'm fond of it, but perhaps it needs to go. Only really important things get capitalized.

~Neshomeh

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