Subject: :D
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Posted on: 2011-06-08 22:13:00 UTC
That is a good antidote to the above badfic.
Subject: :D
Author:
Posted on: 2011-06-08 22:13:00 UTC
That is a good antidote to the above badfic.
All of those are pretty bad, but what really got to me was "You might catch ammonia". SERIOUSLY. FFT. YOU CAN'T CATCH A CHEMICAL AS IF IT'S A COLD.
He probably meant 'pneumonia'. Still, you have to TRY to make a mistake like that...
But pneumonia and ammonia are two completely different things, albeit sounding somewhat similar.
Blech. You really DO have to try to make a mistake like that.
I have no idea how to make a link though...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5135022/1/ACalvinForAllSeasons