Subject: Commas!
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Posted on: 2013-05-19 18:17:00 UTC

Right, this is... well, yeah, badfic. But the age of the author from writing analysis alone appears to be both painfully obvious and painfully young. *Does mental calculation* I'd assume that the author is younger than fifteen, and I'm pretty certain that this is them trying.

... Sweet Eru, what is this fascination ficthors have with Nymphs in Arda? The only thing I can think of that would give them the impression that they existed is Goldberry, and Goldberry's an oddity.

And Glaurung it, if you need to put "Flashback" and "End of Flashback," I'm sending you back to remedial formatting school!

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