Subject: Mary Sues are acceptable targets.
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Posted on: 2013-05-17 04:47:00 UTC
I presume this is a begrudging truce, Agent Fearn.
-Dis
((Oh hello there! Dawn and I were wondering who was playing Fearn. Heh. ~Lily))
So here, have the introduction to the Sixth Disentangler and the Fifth Agent, which is, er, the regeneration scene that brings us the Sixth Disentangler.
Intro: Regenerations.
They'll be showing up in a mission or two as well, don't worry.
Looking forward to reading what you've got in store for these two! :)
Yup. It's happening: Lily and I are teaming up. Which reminds me, I owe her a scene...
~DF
On the one hand, it's sort of nice having people from home popping up at all hours. On the other hand... well, given the sort of people the Time Lords were by the end, you'll forgive me for not trusting any of you in the slightest.
Except the Doctor. He's (as always) the exception.
~M
My lump of a partner here fancied you while you still looked like Romana II; we're not exactly brand-new around here.
-Dis
But while your physical presence may not be brand-new, you certainly are. And so am I, for that matter. The fact that my original incarnation was naive doesn't mean I should follow in, er, my own footsteps.
~M
New New New Morgan and New New New New New New Disentangler?
Speaking of which, you've only been around here about a year less than me and the Agent - how come you're only on Morgan Number Three and I'm on Disentangler Number Six? Your sense of self-preservation's astounding.
-Dis
Thus far, I've only gotten killed during dire emergencies, whereas you? Everyone and his evil henchman has murdered you. I mean, good grief! Even the Doctor - burning stars, even the Master managed to keep most of his bodies at least a couple of years. What are you (two) like?
~M
Maybe a cup of tea would be better in the future. The Agent's attached to Suebuprofen tea tablets; it makes him easier to deal with sometimes, you know.
-Dis
Who knows what they were teaching you lot at the Academy?
Ah, the temporal anomaly! Hello there.
-Dis
He worked on the Bio-Dome project on Mars, and I think he might have worked with Torchwood, too? Not sure.
Oh, Doctor Who. She thought Time Lords mated like werewolves and that Time Lord genes could be activated in humans.
I like this a lot, you really managed to convey the emotions of the characters. I haven't actually read anything about them before, but it was clear just from reading this piece that they've got a long history together.
I look forward to reading more about the Disentangler and the Agent.
Oh, and I think that 'mean ol’ witch-with-a-capital-B' has just become my favourite new insult.
and prior to my adopting them I added them into the Blackout interlude, but only as minor characters.
But I've got plans for these two, so I think you can look forward to seeing more of them pretty soon!
That insult's taken from my pre-med teacher. He also likes to use "dipthong" as an insult.
I see it as Dis and the Agent looking up to these ten young Time Lords and trying to keep track of their adventures, a schoolish variation on them keeping tabs on the canon later.
I like it :)
Also, it's good foreshadowing :)
~DF
I like it. Sad that the Disentangler had to go without the Agent, but I like it. Interesting situation you've put em in!
It's fun.
Though my brother uses it when he is being purposely annoying, so perhaps I have some negativity towards it... Still, those reactions were Marvin and Printworthy's, not mine.
Ahh, so you dislike "le"? I myself cannot see a character described as "smirking" without instantly disliking them...a bad 'Suefic has ruined that word for me forever. V.V
))