Subject: *Makes a face*
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Posted on: 2010-12-14 23:32:00 UTC

Blech.
It's a bad sign when the character declares their crush on the canon main character in the second sentence.
Also, it's terrible that she has 45 minutes to get to school? Heaven help her if she went to school in my district, where high school starts at 7:15. And how is 45 minutes not enough time to get ready?
For a fic set in an originally Japanese fandom, this fic (I've only read only the first chapter) is sadly un-Japanese. It's also riddled with punctuation and spelling errors.
Straw misogyny? Great.
Is it a little worrying that the Sue's evil self is meaner than Dark Yugi. And that crap about her 'little star'...

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