light and dark? by
jimmy 389
on 2010-12-15 02:51:00 UTC
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Sounds like a trollfic to me, I'll have to check it out.
...I'm scared to read this. by
BookwormMika
on 2010-12-15 00:29:00 UTC
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I've gotten a virus from the Yu-gi-oh section of FFN in the past, and something this bad... argh. Good luck to you if you take it, though.
*Makes a face* by
Sylibane
on 2010-12-14 23:32:00 UTC
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Blech.
It's a bad sign when the character declares their crush on the canon main character in the second sentence.
Also, it's terrible that she has 45 minutes to get to school? Heaven help her if she went to school in my district, where high school starts at 7:15. And how is 45 minutes not enough time to get ready?
For a fic set in an originally Japanese fandom, this fic (I've only read only the first chapter) is sadly un-Japanese. It's also riddled with punctuation and spelling errors.
Straw misogyny? Great.
Is it a little worrying that the Sue's evil self is meaner than Dark Yugi. And that crap about her 'little star'...
My £0.02 by
Cassie Cameron-Young
on 2010-12-14 06:16:00 UTC
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I'd say put it on the unclaimed list, see if anyone wants it, and if not, nab it if you fancy when you get Permission.
Also, can I request that any more badfic reports go on a current thread, rather than starting a new one? Every new thread on the Board deletes an old one from the very end, and we don't want too much of that.
Why must they do such things? by
Phobos
on 2010-12-14 05:40:00 UTC
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You can put it on the unclaimed list if you want to. Just hope it is still there when you get permission.
Another option is to put it on the claimed fic list. You don't need permission to claim a fic. You only need permission to do something about it.