Subject: Re: *Makes a face*
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Posted on: 2010-12-15 03:49:00 UTC
Before you think about reading further, fair warning that it gets worse. Trading less errors in punctuation and spelling for even worse portrayls of the characters.
Mary Sue in question leads what amounts to a Gender-flipped life identical to Yugi (Only she lives with her Grandma, has a Puzzle which happens to make a Rose instead of a pyramid, and is driving normally shy Yugi OOC.)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5744252/1/LightandDark
I'd love to take it on myself, but can't even apply anytime soon. Should it be brought to the unclaimed list?
Sounds like a trollfic to me, I'll have to check it out.
Wow
"Yami felt her presents dissapear."
I wonder how that will look in the mission.
I've gotten a virus from the Yu-gi-oh section of FFN in the past, and something this bad... argh. Good luck to you if you take it, though.
Blech.
It's a bad sign when the character declares their crush on the canon main character in the second sentence.
Also, it's terrible that she has 45 minutes to get to school? Heaven help her if she went to school in my district, where high school starts at 7:15. And how is 45 minutes not enough time to get ready?
For a fic set in an originally Japanese fandom, this fic (I've only read only the first chapter) is sadly un-Japanese. It's also riddled with punctuation and spelling errors.
Straw misogyny? Great.
Is it a little worrying that the Sue's evil self is meaner than Dark Yugi. And that crap about her 'little star'...
Before you think about reading further, fair warning that it gets worse. Trading less errors in punctuation and spelling for even worse portrayls of the characters.
I'd say put it on the unclaimed list, see if anyone wants it, and if not, nab it if you fancy when you get Permission.
Also, can I request that any more badfic reports go on a current thread, rather than starting a new one? Every new thread on the Board deletes an old one from the very end, and we don't want too much of that.
My apologies, I've already got it up in Unclaimed.
As well, I'll keep that in mind. Thank you for not ripping my head off for doing this.
I don't rip heads off anyway. It makes an awful mess. :P
You can put it on the unclaimed list if you want to. Just hope it is still there when you get permission.
Another option is to put it on the claimed fic list. You don't need permission to claim a fic. You only need permission to do something about it.
Meh, I'd rather it be done before my month is up. If it's still there when/if I earn permission, whenever that might be, then I can claim it for myself.
Besides, I've got others in the back of my mind. Thank you for responding. I'll bring it to the Unclaimed section now.