Subject: Bechdel Test
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Posted on: 2010-04-20 22:22:00 UTC

I have a couple of female characters in the graphic novel script I'm writing. None of the major ones have had a discussion though. One of the major ones, Tallory, has spoken to a minor female character, Naj, during a larger argument. Here's how the conversation went:

Description: Tallory joins the rest of the group, who are each retrieving their horses from being tied to posts. Christof, the avorian man in thier party, is on his horse and gets into the conversation.

Christof:
What's all this now?

Tallory:
We're not killing anymore goblins.


Description: The Yeanese girl, Paj, buts in. She looks put off.

Paj:
And you're just deciding this for us, here and now?


Description: Tallory is on her horse now.

Tallory:
It doesn't bother you at all that we're killing for money?

Paj:
For five bronze bits I'd brain one of my sisters. There are plenty more where she came from.



What was the point of that? I just wanted to paste an amusing conversation from my script.

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