You've reminded me... by
Twiggy
on 2010-01-07 11:47:00 UTC
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...that I need to start watching NCIS again. Amazing show.
Poor Tony. I used to hate him when I first started watching the show, but he's grown on me a heck of a lot since then. ALSO KATE WHY? I didn't even recognise her as Kate. I had to blink at the name for ages to convince myself that this was not a random OC who'd been shoved into the office. And McGee seems to have been turned into a walking plot device. What did he ever do to deserve that?
And... you know what, if I point out everything that annoyed me about the badfic we'd be here all day. You've already done an excellent job of putting together a charge list. :]
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WHY IS A TWO-YEAR-OLD READING DEEP SIX.
Okay, that was the last thing, I swear. But good lord, there is so much bad in this fic. And I'm only halfway through the mission as I post this comment.
In conclusion, I fangirl Tamsin's arsenic tangent.
Oooooh. by
Neshomeh
on 2010-01-06 17:55:00 UTC
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You did a mission in a fandom I know! Yay!
NCIS Sue. Not yay. {= P
I agree that Gibbs is one of those characters who's very likely to resist the Suefluence, like Lord Elrond. I wouldn't be surprised if he was acting strange in that fic because he knew something was very, very wrong. And what a Sue! Was she using a checklist for how to be the Suiest NCIS Sue possible? I'm glad she's gone. It is unfortunate that your agents deemed the daughter unsalvageable, though.
One point: the expression is seeing as/that/how, not seen. People slur it to sound like "seen" a lot, but it isn't. I think you used it about three times in the mission, so you might want to go back and fix it.
So... is Tasmin from an NCIS fic, or is she just a student in the L. Jethro Gibbs Distance-Learning Course for How To Treat Your Co-Workers?
~Neshomeh, who might have to go hunting for NCIS crossovers to kill now.