Subject: Re: Somewhat well?
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Posted on: 2013-04-17 23:11:00 UTC

No problem.
Your portrayal of Printworthy's crisis is good in that there actually was a crisis (as opposed to Printworthy accepting it at once), and that you portrayed a believable thought process as Printworthy came to terms with reality.
My only qualm--and in hindsight, it is pretty minor, if it is legitimate at all--was that Printworthy came to accept the truth pretty quickly; I was not sure if someone who was just told "You are a figment of someone's imagination" would have come to accept it so quickly.

Long story short, I see no reason to change it; your portrayal or Printworthy was good.

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