I'll have to re-read the whole thing later. Also, you can't blame the SO too much for not knowing about vampires - there are so many different kinds floating around.

I'm looking forward to the last of it.

"Er... do any of you have a Remote Activator on you?"

I think that was my favorite line. It cut the drama in a very good way. *g*

I caught a couple of things:

1. Captain Dandy rustled his feathers.
-- Really?

2. She [Tango] squeezes his hand and turned away.
-- I assume that's meant to be "squeezed."

Also, I just noticed that the text turns red on mouse-over. Is there a reason for that?

I look forward to the conclusion of the story. And then I'll really have to go back and read everything straight through, because it will be excellent. {= )

~Neshomeh

Fantastic. Fan-kriffing-tastic.

*is gleeful and squee-y and very very impressed*

And I cannae say any more for fear I give out spoilers.

More "Crashing Down"! And it's as awesome as always. I squeed a bit at both of the revelations.

I don't mean to bother you, but I'm just curious about something. Is the mention of the Waterlily Commander a mistake, or was the DMF&F actually larger than Floaters at that time? Also, I apologise for the delay in the things I'm writing up, but it's been a matter of getting to them (and, in the case of the email, organising everything in a neat manner). Nicely written, I was just wondering about the Waterlily Commander thing.

My memories of my narmful PPC: Time of Judgement fic are fading away already...Thank you.