Subject: What if...
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Posted on: 2008-08-08 07:32:00 UTC

What if Eledhwen somehow escaped to the PPC from the Factory? I mean, if I were yanked from my home and subjected to experiments resulting in an insanely happy, fuzzy-pink-bunny-loving photocopy of myself, I'd seriously want vengeance. Talk about motivation for becoming an agent! And the escape would be an interesting story in itself. Think of the implications: a chance for HQ to find and shut down one of the Factories.

I'm sorry to say this, but as a character, the clone doesn't interest me half so much. The hard truth is that it sounds too much like a Middle-earth bamf!Sue. If you want to write a Tolkien elf, that's cool. If you want to write an insane girl who likes fuzzy pink things, that's cool, too (though most agents would rather mutilate the fuzzy pink things, really). I just don't think the two mix very well.

Keep working on it.

~Neshomeh

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