Subject: Honestly, zdimensia...
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Posted on: 2014-06-12 16:52:00 UTC
...a big part of it was just the way he went about it before it got to this point. Honestly, I would be a lot less angry about this whole thing than I am if it weren't for the fact that this is the capstone of some really bad behavior on his part, and if not for the fact that he is still lying about all the things he did. If you want the sparknotes version, you can have that here: http://literarytravesty.wordpress.com/2013/12/30/a-response-to-jedi-qui-gon/
If he had just started with this, I would've been annoyed, but I wouldn't be infuriated. But the fact that this is the capstone of what I mention there... Yeah.
The mission itself goes a bit deeper than you imply. His prose has improved, there are some actual descriptions now, and the plot isn't a parade of complete bat-shit insanity, but that's about all I can say. His characters are still completely uninteresting cardboard cut-outs, they still talk like they're in a Saturday Morning cartoon, his action scenes are still very poorly paced, and in this case there's still no attempt to reconcile the canons. So there was some improvement, but it's not by much.
And anyway, he's still trying to defend this fic by making it so that the PPC never went in and corrected it. That implies that he still believes there was some quality to be had there, no? So therefore, any talk of "improvement" from his end is, to my eyes, him being full of shit.