Subject: Got to chapter 3
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Posted on: 2014-05-05 21:33:00 UTC

I wasn't finding this fic completely bad for an AU, so I critted it to his face.

Basically points of confusion, bits that made things too easy, (though I didn't notice that the animagus drought could be made with the stuff Harry had on-hand,) the permissiveness of the adults...

I did say that his forms were too cool.

At chapter 3, I told him that the concepts could be fun if split into several different fics.

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