Subject: I would, but...
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Posted on: 2013-11-08 15:53:00 UTC
every time I try to send you an email my internet crashes and i don't know why.
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Request for a SPaG Beta by
on 2013-11-06 23:21:00 UTC
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Despite being the start of NaNoWriMo my writing has slowed to a stop in that area (after only 2,000 words as well), while I have turned my attention back towards Permission. Working on the advice from Phobos in my previous attempt, I know I have a lot of commas missing in my writing sample but for the life of me I can't work out where to insert more (there are a couple of other problems but that's the main one).
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Drop me a mail. by
on 2013-11-07 04:55:00 UTC
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My address is sur DOT nhm AT gmail DOT com. While RL is eating my free time up, I'll see what I can do.
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I would, but... by
on 2013-11-08 15:53:00 UTC
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every time I try to send you an email my internet crashes and i don't know why.
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Odd. by
on 2013-11-08 20:32:00 UTC
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Maybe it's the Shin Bet spying on you or something.
More seriously though, can you share a GDoc with the above-mentioned address? -
After my last attempt with Gdocs? by
on 2013-11-08 22:59:00 UTC
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Yeah I'll try in the morning, I'm a bit tipsy at the moment.
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Re: Request for a SPaG Beta by
on 2013-11-06 23:25:00 UTC
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I can take a look at it; spotting SPaG errors is my thing. My e-mail address should be linked above.
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Thanks by
on 2013-11-06 23:28:00 UTC
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Yeah, it is.
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Got it. by
on 2013-11-06 23:35:00 UTC
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I won't promise that you'll get it back today, but I will look at it.
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Within a month would be fine :p (nm) by
on 2013-11-07 02:12:00 UTC
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How about now? by
on 2013-11-08 05:36:00 UTC
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I hope that you can work with Microsoft Word's "Track Changes" function, since I want you to see what exactly I did to your piece. Hopefully, it helps you see how to improve on your SPaG issues.
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Thanks (nm) by
on 2013-11-08 15:52:00 UTC
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