Subject: How about now?
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Posted on: 2013-11-08 05:36:00 UTC
I hope that you can work with Microsoft Word's "Track Changes" function, since I want you to see what exactly I did to your piece. Hopefully, it helps you see how to improve on your SPaG issues.
Despite being the start of NaNoWriMo my writing has slowed to a stop in that area (after only 2,000 words as well), while I have turned my attention back towards Permission. Working on the advice from Phobos in my previous attempt, I know I have a lot of commas missing in my writing sample but for the life of me I can't work out where to insert more (there are a couple of other problems but that's the main one).
Storme Hawk
My address is sur DOT nhm AT gmail DOT com. While RL is eating my free time up, I'll see what I can do.
every time I try to send you an email my internet crashes and i don't know why.
Maybe it's the Shin Bet spying on you or something.
More seriously though, can you share a GDoc with the above-mentioned address?
Yeah I'll try in the morning, I'm a bit tipsy at the moment.
I can take a look at it; spotting SPaG errors is my thing. My e-mail address should be linked above.
Yeah, it is.
I won't promise that you'll get it back today, but I will look at it.
I hope that you can work with Microsoft Word's "Track Changes" function, since I want you to see what exactly I did to your piece. Hopefully, it helps you see how to improve on your SPaG issues.