Subject: Addressing those.
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Posted on: 2013-09-24 22:37:00 UTC

1) Wartime story. There'll always be a lot more important stuff to do than getting together while still leaving enough opportunity to put those in.

Not to mention, there's four other original characters I've put in and I intend them to be more than just setpieces.
Well, one - the half-jerk pilot whose sole reason for desertion in the first place was the better pay freelancing would offer - still needs some working on, think I'll be giving him a family or at least some ethics.


2) In her canonical appearance she was about eighteen, probably had been rushed through pilot training and nepotism'd into the position of Chief Test Pilot at her father's monolithic corporation. First real combat action on the ground: Getting kidnapped and held at gunpoint. In the air? Going up against a cruiser by herself. Result? Reality ensued in both cases, fortunately aid was at hand.

The fic takes place nine years after that. She's probably had plenty of time to practice, however her parents are still likely (and justifiably) displeased by the idea of letting her enter actual combat.


Dangerous situation they can't face head-on without support?
Hmmmm...
Large creature, capable of space travel and ranged attack. Intelligent.
Canonically stated to have nearly completely destroyed an entire fleet seventeen years before the story takes place.
Canonically defeated only by a most excellent pilot aided by his team, all armed with state-of-the-art weaponry.

Speaking of which, said weaponry was developed by the corporation the LI works for. Similar designs were likely also created by the military; it is likely Michael's team is in possession of a few. His piloting skills are entirely simulation-based, however.
One of these creatures should suffice to make the odds seem overwhelming to the realist's eye and challenging to the overconfident. Now I'll have to read up on dogfighting tactics.

As for the success option, let's have her face a wing of assault bombers - their anti-fighter weapons are relatively powerful, but easy to avoid by a skilled pilot. The LI would definitely beat the OC there. He might actually end up getting saved by her instead.

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