Subject: This is – I – take it away
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Posted on: 2015-06-21 18:27:00 UTC

Don’t worry, no actual damage done. I just felt uncomfortable reading this, because it reminds me too much of younger me. Which actually means that it is very well done. I wouldn’t know that what I eventually grew out of was a depression, if you hadn’t shown me and Tira hadn’t told me its name.

One thing though:
He asked the woman why she should leave: he had reserved the computer lab for his club.
"she" should be "he".

HG

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