Subject: *Puts a Hat on*
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Posted on: 2015-06-05 14:42:00 UTC
Hoom, hoom.
Activity: Yep, you're active enough, and - surprisingly - you've been here for over a month! I didn't quite realise that. All good, here.
PPC knowledge: Your prompts don't contain any mistakes that I can spot and I know that you can a) ask questions or b) look for the answers yourself, so you're good here.
Fic to spork: Yeah, that's a Sue, aright, and something in the writing made my head swim (ha, ha). One question, though: what's it's fandom? Closest I think about is Disney's Little Mermaid, but if that's the case, well... that's not the Little Mermaid I remember watching when I was ten.
Writing ability (creative): The prompts are funny - especially the random one, I like what you did with the sneak-thieving mini-Aragog there - and the characters are good. I do have one concern - while your writing is by no means purple, it's a bit too florid, in my opinion, so it would do you good to pay attention to this particular aspect of it; since you seem to be on it already, you're good to go.
Writing ability (technical): You're good. There are a couple of mistakes (.. instead of an ellipsis in the control prompt, a misspelled sandwich in the other prompt's title) but they're nothing glaring and the sort of thing a beta would catch, anyway.
Therefore: Permission granted
I, Baron Thanasius Ampelius of the Monastery of Spectacle in the Refuge of Ozerbord, in accordance with the Edict of Bast and the laws of the land, do grant you the title of Knight, and with it the obligation to fight the Marizu wherever they may be found.
Rejoice!