Subject: Yaaay! *bells*
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Posted on: 2015-05-10 18:18:00 UTC

The comments after the animatronics' CAD readings were hilarious, especially Foxy's and OOC!Freddy's. (I'm still never ever playing the games. I don't do horror, and I don't do possessed killer animatronics.)

Oh, two minor things...
"...Also, ow, my, kidneys.”"
That comma after "my" doesn't belong there.

"Valon popped his elbows back into place before pointing his C-CAD at Foxy."
Uh...is this possible? I don't think Valon would be able to do that himself if both elbows got dislocated.

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