If it's meant to be decorative or as a means to build your characters, I would say go ahead. If you're using it to give your characters an advantage over the Sues (like it's some sort of special anti-Sue weapon), that would be a bit more questionable in my eyes.

Also, come up with a good in-universe reason as to why your agents might have such a thing. Saying it was a welcoming present is both a bit uncreative and slightly blurring the lines between us and our creations. Who knows? Maybe the explanation will spur further stories.

If I remember correctly, the consensus is 'go right ahead'. Of course, if I'm wrong, go ahead and correct me, guys.

Congrats on getting Permission, Edhelistar! I should probably start writing my request, since I've got my agent concepts pretty much figured out... Though I'll probably not have the courage to post it anyway. :P
As a gift, have this plate of Pancakes-With-Way-Too-Much-Sugar! I was trying to make eggnog, but I had a fortunate accident. No Suvian flavouring this time, my provider closed. (Something about "health and safety concerns", or some boring stuff like that)

And thanks to everyone that congratulated me! In celebration, I declare the Danger Room, free to use for everyone! No questions asked!

(After all is just a large Standard Mandalorian Iron-covered Blast Chamber from DoSAT-T&A, modified with Capital Ship-class force fields, Hard Light projectors and a videogame AI [Very Easy, Easy, Normal, Hard, Very Hard, Insane and Suicidal difficulty levels available].)

Now you just need the uniform--what am I saying, those went out ages ago.

Looking forward to seeing your characters in action!

/rolls out in desk chair, tossing squares of Swiss Bleepolate like confetti/

~DF

I plan on submitting my own... eventually. I have a good idea of my agents at the moment, so who knows

*blows noisemaker* *gives peanut butter cookies* I look forward to reading your missions!

I'm still tweaking my own agents, not entirely comfortable with them yet...

Very well done! I look forward to seeing your agents in action.


I have but one nitpick: you mention a NATO-standard pistol as Yuna's weapon. NATO doesn't actually have a standard issue pistol-- ammunition is standardized (9x19mm Parabellum for pistols, 5.56x45mm or 7.62x51m for rifles) but not weapons. A quick look at Wikipedia's list of service pistols suggest that most NATO countries equip their soldiers with HK, SIG Sauer, or Glock 9mm pistols (with the notable exception of Belgium, which uses Fabrique Nationale's Five-seveN and its weird, tiny bullet).

Weeeeee! *throws 42 bags of confetti in the air*

I would've done a little more with the proofreading, but nice to see that you've improved since your first attempt. Good luck with your first mission! :D

I'd just like to add you should pay special attention to your SPaG and avoid ellipsis floods.
Conga Rats, dood.