Seriously, I envy your persistence. I probably would've attempted to pull a Division of Multiple Offenses in the first book if I'd tried to tackle that...thing.

Rose Potter: where carving words into your hand is Dark Magic, but carving words into your best friend's forehead is perfectly normal.

Oh, and I love this bit:

“Can we charge for being trigger-happy and a complete nutjob? I think we can,” Rina said, noting it down.

“You realize you just described over half the PPC?”

“Oh, shut up.”

... Who am I kidding? Why would you even want to be fair with that abomination? This just requires high-temperature termination with extreme prejudice.

Anyway, I love those missions... That mission? Whatever. I'm eagerly waiting for the grand finale! :P

I intended to do the workshop exercise today, and there you come and distract me again :-)

Also, how dare Moody for not bowing to her?
Does "for" really belong there?

Rina solved his dilemma by putting down her notebook holding her hand out for the wated to sniff.
"and" missing between "notebook" and "holding"?
PS: I love the wated.

I’m more concerned with the fact that Rose is able to get away with attacking high-ranking Ministry officials like this and get away with it,
This may be intentional, showing how furious Rina is, and nothing seems impossible at this point. But getting away and getting away with it may be a bit much?

HG

Didn't you say somewhere that after this you are doing "Little Miss Mary"? Are you TRYING to die or something?

No proofreading errors that I seem to have noticed this time. I eagerly await the grand finale!

Though, Rose remembering that the agents killed her? That's not what I'd call a good sign...

At this rate I expect that this monstrosity will finally be put to rest within a week.

Just hang in there, must a little longer.

I have not read the mission yet, nor will I, until the final death. I will then read every mission in a row and comment on them all as one giant mission. So, consider this additional motivation.

...that she DOES, in fact, have a life outside of the PPC. She just has a crazy determination to kill this horrible series. Anyway, fantastic work!