Subject: Using Impunity
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Posted on: 2015-03-24 23:14:00 UTC
Or did I end up posting that as a response to the wrong thread?
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Rose Potter, Part 5 already?! by
on 2015-03-24 16:23:00 UTC
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I have no idea how I managed it, but here you go, everyone!
I swear to Rowling I have a life outside the PPC! *sweatdrops and runs off to start on Part 6* -
You mad, brave, stubborn, mad woman. by
on 2015-03-25 03:05:00 UTC
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Seriously, I envy your persistence. I probably would've attempted to pull a Division of Multiple Offenses in the first book if I'd tried to tackle that...thing.
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You can do it! A great reward awaits at the end! (nm) by
on 2015-03-25 00:40:00 UTC
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You are not prepared (nm) by
on 2015-03-25 00:49:00 UTC
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I never said it was going to come from the fic. ;) (nm) by
on 2015-03-25 00:55:00 UTC
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Nearly done! by
on 2015-03-24 21:59:00 UTC
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Rose Potter: where carving words into your hand is Dark Magic, but carving words into your best friend's forehead is perfectly normal.
Oh, and I love this bit:
“Can we charge for being trigger-happy and a complete nutjob? I think we can,” Rina said, noting it down.
“You realize you just described over half the PPC?”
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Yeah, yeah, nearly there, nearly there! by
on 2015-03-24 22:05:00 UTC
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Rose Potter is just... absolutely insane. There really were no words to describe the horror she inflicted upon poor Ron.
That was one of my favorite parts to write. :3
This is me the entire time I'm sporking Rose Potter:
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That is the darkest .gif I have ever seen. by
on 2015-03-24 22:11:00 UTC
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Or, rather, have not seen. I think I see a dude in there, but... Man. Iximaz, I would scrap this one, if I were you.
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I couldn't even react to part 4! Anyway, to be fair... by
on 2015-03-24 21:31:00 UTC
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... Who am I kidding? Why would you even want to be fair with that abomination? This just requires high-temperature termination with extreme prejudice.
Anyway, I love those missions... That mission? Whatever. I'm eagerly waiting for the grand finale! :P -
Rose is a dirty rotten cheater. Fairness isn't an option. by
on 2015-03-24 21:33:00 UTC
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Glad to know you're enjoying it! Like I said, the grand finale will be at 12:00 p.m. EST, so... yeah, hope you like that, too! :3
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Hey, gimme a break. by
on 2015-03-24 20:41:00 UTC
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I intended to do the workshop exercise today, and there you come and distract me again :-)
Also, how dare Moody for not bowing to her?
Does "for" really belong there?
Rina solved his dilemma by putting down her notebook holding her hand out for the wated to sniff.
"and" missing between "notebook" and "holding"?
PS: I love the wated.
I’m more concerned with the fact that Rose is able to get away with attacking high-ranking Ministry officials like this and get away with it,
This may be intentional, showing how furious Rina is, and nothing seems impossible at this point. But getting away and getting away with it may be a bit much?
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The moral: When Iximaz posts missions, GET OUT OF THE WAY! by
on 2015-03-24 22:39:00 UTC
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I mean, I didn't learn that golden rule in time, and look what happened. XD
As for the third proofreading, I think a better way to word it would be, "I'm more concerned with the fact that Rose is able to attack high-ranking Ministry officials like this with impunity." Because that last word sounds a bit stronger and knowing Rose, I suppose that's a plus. -
Ehehe... ^^; by
on 2015-03-24 22:46:00 UTC
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Don't worry, after Part 6, I'm gonna take a bit of a break from writing missions.
But I think I'll keep it the way it is. I mean, unless you suffer from Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness, not many people use 'impunity' in casual conversation. -
Wait. That's not normal? (nm) by
on 2015-03-24 23:00:00 UTC
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What's not normal? (nm) by
on 2015-03-24 23:11:00 UTC
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Using Impunity by
on 2015-03-24 23:14:00 UTC
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Or did I end up posting that as a response to the wrong thread?
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Oh. by
on 2015-03-24 23:23:00 UTC
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Well, not that it's not normal, per se, but it doesn't fit with Rina's character, especially at that particular moment in time. I strive for realistic dialogue, not to show off my admittedly grandiose lexicon. :P I do like to use big words just for kicks, but when you're upset, what do you say, "Aw man!" or "I find this situation to be highly displeasing."? (
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The latter by
on 2015-03-24 23:26:00 UTC
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Well at least sometimes. Though more than likely it would look something like this "Censored censored! Son censored censored censored censored censored duck. Censored!"
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BTW by
on 2015-03-24 22:58:00 UTC
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Courtesy link for those who wonder WTH those two words mean.
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Never! by
on 2015-03-24 20:53:00 UTC
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Part 6 is already done and ready to go tomorrow, too, so no break for you! :P
Oops, no it doesn't!
Right, will add.
(I love the wated too. The typo made me laugh so hard- I mean, how do you confuse 'wallet' with 'wated'?)
Whoops, that would be my own Angrish showing. Fixed, fixed, aaand fixed! -
Also... by
on 2015-03-24 18:52:00 UTC
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Didn't you say somewhere that after this you are doing "Little Miss Mary"? Are you TRYING to die or something?
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Hahaha by
on 2015-03-24 18:57:00 UTC
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Nah, after LMM, I think I'll be done with Legendaries. Believe it or not, I do value what little sanity I have left.
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You are a brave, brave soul. Take all my joyous love. by
on 2015-03-24 18:33:00 UTC
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No proofreading errors that I seem to have noticed this time. I eagerly await the grand finale!
Though, Rose remembering that the agents killed her? That's not what I'd call a good sign... -
*accepts love* by
on 2015-03-24 18:38:00 UTC
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I can't wait until tomorrow. Noon won't come fast enough.
And yeah, Rose is... well, you'll see. >:) -
Well, that was fast by
on 2015-03-24 17:47:00 UTC
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At this rate I expect that this monstrosity will finally be put to rest within a week.
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I'm hoping for tomorrow or the day after. by
on 2015-03-24 17:48:00 UTC
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The excess of plagiarism makes my job a lot easier, mercifully.
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Part 6 will be done by tomorrow, guys! by
on 2015-03-24 18:28:00 UTC
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I'll have it posted at 12:00 Eastern Standard Time, so... yeah. Be ready and keep an eye out!
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You better be exact by
on 2015-03-24 18:31:00 UTC
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I'll be checking if it shows up exactly at 12:00 EST. If it doesn't, I am revoking your rights for free cookies.
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NOT THE COOKIES! by
on 2015-03-24 18:39:00 UTC
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Don't worry, I'll be eagerly awaiting noon tomorrow to post! :3
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That is the one good thing about the plagiarism by
on 2015-03-24 17:51:00 UTC
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Since it's taken from something that is already good to begin with, it is made "slightly" less painful, but not by much.
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You are almost there. by
on 2015-03-24 17:08:00 UTC
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Just hang in there, must a little longer.
I have not read the mission yet, nor will I, until the final death. I will then read every mission in a row and comment on them all as one giant mission. So, consider this additional motivation. -
I'm already up to chapter three of seven. by
on 2015-03-24 17:14:00 UTC
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At this rate, the series will be finished wither tomorrow or the day after. :D
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If I had your writing speed... by
on 2015-03-24 17:28:00 UTC
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I would be almost through Starfleet Magic 3, with two missions from Jumper on the side.
I look forward to seeing how this turns out. -
Hopefully, I won't disappoint! :3 (nm) by
on 2015-03-24 17:34:00 UTC
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I can confirm... by
on 2015-03-24 16:40:00 UTC
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...that she DOES, in fact, have a life outside of the PPC. She just has a crazy determination to kill this horrible series. Anyway, fantastic work!