This is a confirmed trollfic. It’s like My Immortal but with a prep protagonist, bashing of “nredz” and SPaG worse than My Immortal’s author’s notes, which is saying a LOT. There’s a Mary Sue named Ivy (I think that’s her name), everyone is OOC,(Dumbledore explodes a random Slytherin) and the SPaG is eyeball-exploding bad. If you can tolerate that, it’s mission-worthy.
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Another HP badfic by
on 2022-04-18 20:32:54 UTC
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re: mission by
on 2022-04-18 18:07:53 UTC
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Sorry I didn't review sooner; it's been a pretty packed week!
Wow, Strawberry Shortcake is still a thing?! Like, ongoing? I didn't realize it had any new canon produced after the 1980s. I remember my sisters still had some
SS wow, no, bad acronym on that titleSBSC merch sitting around the house as I grew up. Weird that I never heard anything about new material, even by accidental add viewing! Well, on behalf of my now-adult sisters, thank you for defending this canon!Sand dollars, eh? Clever use of a non-currency currency on the show's part. A mini that's more like an object is a unique concept, especially with how it can affect people! Are the minis like actual sand dollars, like, can they crawl very slowly? Maybe need salt water to stay hydrated properly?
I like how you structured this mission, with Urato getting enticed to wander away for more sand dollars, only to get caught up in the flashback. It felt like a very natural narrative progression! I also like the point Inasuke made about not performing assassinations within SBSC, since it would have the wrong tone for that canon. It felt like a very Original Series-esque observation to make!
A couple minor errorish things:
"This was however not the most aggravating the house had to offer."
I feel like either "aggravating thing" or "aggravation" would be a little more grammatically correct, there. Just feels like a noun belongs in there.". . . in an undescribed environment of endless beige where Avocado and black licorice converse."
I think you want "conversed" here, just to match the past tense of the rest of the paragraph?—doctorlit got a weird sense of enjoyment from picturing SBSC characters dissolving Infinity Stone-style
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I’m waiting by
on 2022-04-18 16:33:49 UTC
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I’m reading TOS in order, but this looks interesting. And that cause of death is quite tragic.
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School computer by
on 2022-04-18 16:32:00 UTC
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It has some weird ideas on what to block... fortunately, I have other devices.
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Thanks for clarifying by
on 2022-04-18 16:29:55 UTC
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Thanks, hS!
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It stuck. (nm) by
on 2022-04-18 16:28:18 UTC
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Pretty much... by
on 2022-04-18 15:53:26 UTC
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... the entire front page will be seen, because it's easy to scroll down and look for the black dots. I always get a little baffled when someone shows up 12 hours after a thread starts and apologises for being so late. o.O
hS
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Thank you! by
on 2022-04-18 15:51:29 UTC
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A lot of my writing consists of flinging out lines in the hope that they'll stick, so it's always good to know one did!
hS
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PPC+20: "Gwendolyn" by
on 2022-04-18 15:50:29 UTC
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Coming in only four days after TOS11, "Gwendolyn" sends Jay and Acacia into a much longer mission this time, thank goodness. I have not yet reread it so I don't remember which one it is. ^_^
Protectors of the Plot Continuum: Gwendolyn by HarpWire
The badfic is by Amy Winner Barton, who apparently died of a severe case of bad... re... views... huh. This sounds awfully familiar. Yep, they took two missions in a row against the same author, and apparently got a lot of flak for it. This may explain the events of less than a month from now... (all right, 20 years ago less than a month from now - you get the point).
hS
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Wait, what? by
on 2022-04-18 14:43:43 UTC
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The entries are hosted on Blogger and put after a sensitive content warning. You can also read the spin-off on Wix (updates slower) and Dreamwidth
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My computer won't let me access the files (nm) by
on 2022-04-18 13:55:45 UTC
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blink blink (nm) by
on 2022-04-18 12:46:07 UTC
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"You're at least halfway hinged" by
on 2022-04-18 03:29:37 UTC
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That line made me smile.
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Thanks for the boat! (nm) by
on 2022-04-18 01:32:18 UTC
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I can't do Discord by
on 2022-04-18 01:26:47 UTC
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I'm unable to access Discord, not that I wouldn't want to.
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It's been too long by
on 2022-04-18 01:25:57 UTC
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I've read both LoTR and the Hobbit, but it's been a long time. I could probably use a reread. And I have a long list of fandoms on my wiki page.
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If no one wants them by
on 2022-04-18 01:22:34 UTC
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If no one else wants I'm Not Okay, then I'd love to tackle it for my (still probably pretty distant) first mission. If someone does want it, please take it. Or both.
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I don't know by
on 2022-04-18 01:14:39 UTC
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The apostrophes are bizarre.
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*sings* Happy birthday to you, by
on 2022-04-17 22:50:35 UTC
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Squashed tomatoes and stew
Bread and butter in the gutter
Happy birthday to you!
I couldn't resist. That is a silly version of Happy Birthday that my family sings.
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Welcome! Have an origami boat! by
on 2022-04-17 22:40:13 UTC
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I am also in LOTR, (I am anxiously anticipating the release of Amazon's Rings of Power and praying tht it won't be as bad as the Hobbit movies), but I haven't really been into Harry Potter in a few years. I am also in the Star Trek fandom, and that's about it. There are other things I like (such as Shakespeare) that I wouldn't really consider myself to be in the fandom but I am still somewhat interested in. That also applies to Star Wars.
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I have an email by
on 2022-04-17 21:34:08 UTC
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Not familiar with the canon at all, by the way.
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I do have trouble with threads, though by
on 2022-04-17 21:31:12 UTC
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I'm not always sure when a thread is active and will get replies.
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Beta request by
on 2022-04-17 21:27:37 UTC
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I'd appreciate it if you could. Got an email?