Subject: Mostly accepted on sight.
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Posted on: 2014-12-09 09:59:00 UTC

I've left the word-choice ones for Lily to decide on. The one I've rejected throughout is your lowercasing of Remote Activator - I see this word in the same class as Canon Analysis Device, so it should retain its capitals. Obviously if Lily disagrees, I'll change it.

hS

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