Subject: I've added some suggested edits.
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Posted on: 2014-12-07 16:33:00 UTC

Mostly to do with commas. I started reading just for the heck of it, considered leaving well enough alone, but then decided to go ahead, since these stories are going out into the world to attract potential new members and all. {= )

No promises that I'll do the rest, but I might if I have the time.

~Neshomeh

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