Subject: I've seen it both capitalized and not.
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Posted on: 2014-12-09 13:00:00 UTC
But the Wiki shows it as lowercase, so I don't capitalize it in my missions...
Subject: I've seen it both capitalized and not.
Author:
Posted on: 2014-12-09 13:00:00 UTC
But the Wiki shows it as lowercase, so I don't capitalize it in my missions...
I think I might volunteer Lana and Narav's first mission (Wings and Water) for this! That's the one over here:
Either this one or Amara, Cepha, and Fio's first mission (A Different Kind of Witch). I'll reread them to make sure they're up to snuff, though.
Lana and Narav: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ELPJWR8MnxfIKn7d6dt-34ewELL2MJc0Wbaxo3V0jY/edit?usp=driveweb
Team CAF: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LV2HV_lqFIegvnWRQn4Z3arKVWMlg-njyLnb2O1S8d4/edit
I should probably rewrite a few bits in the latter, especially Amara's explanation of her backstory, but by and large I'm still happy with how these two turned out.
As soon as I get Permission (doesn't look like soon, though...) I'll get in on it.
And semi-hypocritically, the current fandom scene that is largely on AO3 is against even the term "Mary Sue" being used.
AO3 is fairly active right now but I wouldn't say that translates to more strict but I suspect the PPC would be largely unwelcome there by some louder voices who wouldn't be afraid of reporting missions.
Storme Hawk, did you receive my reply to your email?
I think it's a sound idea so long as we have some way to make sure any readers get to the wiki and/or here afterward. I'd hate if this led to people not knowing about, for example, the need to get Permission before writing their own missions.
There should probably be something to the effect of "written and posted with permission from the PPC Posting Board" in the intro.
~Neshomeh
I already had to dissuade one person who said they now want to write their own missions. Whether or not they'll listen, on the other hand... Hopefully they'll come check out the Board instead like I suggested.
On the other hand, hS, that means your idea has already started showing results, so yay?
I have credit to J&A and a note about permission on my website, and I'm pretty sure I've seen other people mention it, too. There is precedent for this sort of thing, even though we've never asked for it.
I think that line is good. {= )
~Neshomeh
I volunteer Wings and Water (a Lana and Narav mission) and A Different kind of Witch (Team CAF). Des and I are working on polishing Just Read The Instructions, so that might work as well. And I don't have opinions on the Ari/Tera missions, so I guess I might pick one of those... The Teen Titans sue, or that awful nanoha fic I did for their second mission.
I'm not particularly pleased with the ones I wrote in eighth grade, so none of the BSG or Narnia ones will work. I suppose The Other Watson works because it also involves some explanatory bits of the PPC since C and E are training an intern in it. However I'm also very proud of Time Will Tell since it retcons some Agent backgrounds and stuff and the Sue was TOS-calibre.
You can put it up under StormUndSquee, I'm fine with that.
I'd also suggest making the word "canon" lowercase throughout, but there could be an argument for it being an Important Word, so I didn't mark it anywhere.
~Neshomeh
I've left the word-choice ones for Lily to decide on. The one I've rejected throughout is your lowercasing of Remote Activator - I see this word in the same class as Canon Analysis Device, so it should retain its capitals. Obviously if Lily disagrees, I'll change it.
hS
But the Wiki shows it as lowercase, so I don't capitalize it in my missions...
She has very strong opinions on capitalisation and punctuation, and textbooks to back them up. Though - and dare I say it? - she sometimes doesn't take cross-Atlantic language variance into account. Hyphens/dashes/whateveryoucallthem spring to mind...
hS
I follow TOS in the matter of whether or not to capitalize "remote activator." It's inconsistent, but by my count, it's uncapitalized a fair sight more than it's capitalized, so I figure that was the intent. Check it out on Miss Cam's site.
~Neshomeh
But that's just my personal choice.
I have a key for this: -
And I know how to make — out of & mdash ;
But what's the source of that in between kind?
I'm working off my laptop, which has no minus key. And somehow, I forgot the existence of the minus symbol, despite having a plus symbol right here in front of me.
Any chance we're still working on Anneliese? I guess your absence in the doc lately has been because of Driftwood, so I'm just kinda checking in. Mostly because I want to get something written before the motivation goes again.
I've got so many plates spinning in the air that it's hard to keep track of them all... I'll be sure to get something written today.
hS
One of my early ones should fair fit what you're looking forward.
Yes, all of you - I see right through you! You're all just trying to get me to read your missions! 'Oh, you can have any of mine - just choose the one that works best.' Oh, you think you have me fooled, but in fact, it is you you have fooled!
Or something. A-hem. Anyway. Got one in mind?
hS
I was under the distinct impression you had read mine, once upon a time!
As old as it is- seven years, good lord- my first mission, I think.
As for a link, maybe there will be a Christmas Miracle.
You had already read and commented my mission on the Board when I released it! So what you are saying is not possible!
... Ahem, enough with the Phoenix Wright imitiations. I didn't even play the games...
^_^
hS
Oh, who am I kidding? I laughed.
And bah, I don't need to try and get you to read my missions. You've commented on all four so far! So nyah.
I would gladly volunteer my first ever mission and the magnum opus of my PPC writing, Connecting The Dots, because it works well on its own and isn't Bleepfic territory despite the violence near the end.
I'm a bit worried about the length, though - it's 87 pages long, excluding my commentary, and I don't know if FFN would be able to fit it all without having to split it up like the GDocs version.
Namely, FF.net has a ban on script format. Whether your mission technically qualifies is an open question; whether someone could say it does isn't, alas.
That said, if you want to open your own disposable account to post it, I'd be interested to see if it stays up. ;) You could easily chapter it to keep the multiple parts separate.
hS
I think Nume and Ilraen's third mission, "Harry Potter and the Dragonriders of Pern," is probably best for this. It's their first actual crossover, it stands on its own better than their later missions, and while it's on the dramatic side, it's not Bleepfic. The author is still on fanfic.net, but the fic isn't, and her most recent update was back in 2011, so she might not notice or care.
I'm worried that Ilraen's thought-speak brackets won't work on the Pit, so let me know if you need a substitution. Curly brackets, maybe?
~Neshomeh, hoping to attract Pern fans.
I'll have to think about the summary, but nothing springs immediately to mind. I'll get back to you.
And, hm... while it is set mostly in Pernverse, it's definitely a crossover, and I like Potter fans, too. It's probably best to list it for what it is. {= )
~Neshomeh
Well, it's up to you.
Random thread derail: have you seen The (first) Official PPC Songbook before? Thought it might be relevant to your interests.
Also I note it's nearly Christmas and we haven't had a filking game yet...
hS
Good to know what I'm corrupting to my own ends, though.
Yep, I've got those two already, but thanks.
~Neshomeh
Smells of Rose, with Saxo and James. http://rc170.wordpress.com/2012/12/07/smells-of-rose-aka-the-enemy-of-my-enemy/
It has some references to previous missions, but it should work as a self-contained story. Also, it's one of my shorter missions, which might be good for this specific purpose.
WPPC: Agents Saxo and James
It seems to work perfectly well as a self-contained story to me. As with Sergio and Iximaz, I've left it open for comments, so anything you think needs changing, just note it.
hS
Mostly to do with commas. I started reading just for the heck of it, considered leaving well enough alone, but then decided to go ahead, since these stories are going out into the world to attract potential new members and all. {= )
No promises that I'll do the rest, but I might if I have the time.
~Neshomeh
(In a good way!)
I've rejected a couple that were more author word-choice, and left the capitalisation of 'Out of Character' up to EileenAlphabet.
hS
I've added two notes having to do with classification and attributing notes to the correct person. Probably the librarian in me. ^^
I'll still post on my old account, but having missions in more places can't hurt.
'Lord Potter and the Barking Owl' to be specific. It's better than my first, I think, and it's not a relatively obscure fandom like Ranger's Apprentice.
But feel free to use any of them if you need material!
WPPC: Agents Rina & Randa
As with Sergio, I've put it up on GDrive and left it open for comments; anything you think needs changing, comment and I'll do so. (In particular, if you can think of a better brief summary...)
hS
Though it seems a bit silly to put the foul language warnings at the bottom. You can delete that, I guess.
But I laughed at the summary, so... *shrug* maybe I just have low standards, but I liked it.
"Let's put the entire PPC in a glass bottle and keep the doors as closed as possible" just isn't a healthy or reasonable outlook to have. Especially when the main argument is "but my archive!"
No offence, since on thinking about this it might come off a bit harsh and I'm not trying to be. But I really feel this mega-isolationist stance isn't warranted.
Doclit wasn't saying "Shut the doors FOREVAH," he was saying "Hey, if we draw a bunch of attention to the PPC, don't we run the risk of fanfiction.net admins taking notice and deleting everything like they tried to do back in the day?" In which case, yeah, we would lose a big part of the museum. This is not an unreasonable concern, which is why hS decided to hold off posting stuff until we can save the spin-offs still on the Pit.
~Neshomeh
I'm very happy to let her massive number of missions scattered across multiple websites be your headache. ^_~
Seriously, cheers for taking that on. Her stuff is way low on my priorities list.
~Neshomeh
I think I have a couple of missions that could work for something like this. I am in the process of rewriting a bunch of my stuff, however, so it might not be something I pursue right away.
I'd leave the first two out, though - I'm planning to re-write them once I'm over with Blank Sprite as their quality is currently well under my standard.
I thnk the fourth would be a good one if you want to have one example of Agent training, by the way.
WPPC: Agents Sergio and Nikki
That's obviously a GDrive version, which will be transferred intact to FF.net when the time comes. I've left it open for comments; if I've mucked anything up during transfer, or if you see anything you'd like to change (either in your mission or in my added notes at top and bottom), feel free to comment them up.
hS
I left just a little nitpick on one of the notes, the rest is perfectly fine.
I think the way I called them may be confusing. The ones to leave out are Mission 1 and Mission 2, while the suggested one is Mission 4.
You know, I have a Mission 0 and might end up writing Mission Something Point Something in the future...
Well, you're welcome to use mine, of course - I'm quite happy for people to see what I was like when I began writing missions. :P
Obviously everyone has missions which draw heavily on their predecessors - things like Lou's big reveal, or Dafydd's second teamup with Vemi - but equally, I think most teams have the 'monster of the week' type of missions. Yes, they don't serve as a technical intro to the characters - but they still work fine as a standalone. Of Wolves fits that description, for instance.
hS
(because somehow I still haven't finished one yet)
I'd be happy to take part in doing this. I've been thinking of creating a new FF.net account anyway because there are a couple of fanfic ideas I've got in my head atm that I wouldn't mind writing down.
I'd probably get someone's attention if I posted my missions on my old account. I still get PMs asking me to continue writing even though I said I'm done.
Using the old Suethor account for good instead of Sue, I like that! If you've ever PPCed one of your own old Sue stories, I would think that would be the one to post.
It was Bad. With a capital B.
Remus got into a fistfight with Sirius. In first year. Over the Sue.
It's definitely gonna be sporked someday.
If you want to write new missions and post them on FF.net, feel free, but it rather brakes the 'archives' theme. ;)
hS
Like, seriously, I can't stand to read those things and I'm rebooting an entire spinoff because it was terrible. But yeah, I was thinking less "write something specially for this" and more "I'm writing some newer stuff, might contribute some of it when done."
Or you can just do what I'm doing with Driftwood and dual-post it to an FF.net disposable account and your primary archive. Either works.
hS
I would totally volunteer for this series if I were an oldbie.
But doesn't FF.net have some sort of rule against putting up works based on other users' works? Or was there another reason why The Original Series was kicked off?