On the phone, still, but super neat to see him! Given that Dawn and I are working on the mission that spurs him and Gurnirel to join SIELU, it's pretty entertaining.

Other than that, very nicely done. There was a bit that was confusingly worded:

"Um... that if she had any character at all she'd be a flaming Suvian?"

I think you meant "she wouldn't be a flaming Suvian", since Suvians lack character, which Kaitlyn and Selene pointed out later.

Also there's the paragraph after "Fire rained down on Dale" which needs capitalisation, and I think you're also missing a couple dashes between the two paragraphs in general.

But that's all that I found weird. I especially liked the constructive criticism at the end; clearly this fic had a lot more potential.

Just one random paragraph break spotted:

Fire rained down on Dale. The building in front of Kaitlyn crashed down, and she yelped, throwing herself back. A spark caught in her beard, spreading rapidly, and she beat at it frantically before

the scene changed, and they were suddenly in the darkness of Bag End, watching Evelynn wake with a start. The fire was gone, but Kaitlyn still ran her fingers through her beard mournfully. "It's never going to be the same again," she said.

Anyway, I enjoyed this just as much as the others, if not more. This new mission format was interesting, and I was cracking up by the end when poor Kaitlyn was speaking in voices like overly-urple similes.

And the Andalite/Animorph mixup reminded me do much of my mom. She could never keep the two straight despite constant 'Animorph are animal morphers' reminders from me. So I found that extremely amusing.

Nice touch, having the Sue's passiveness becoming her downfall.

10/10 would read again.

Nothing more to say here.
I don't actually read LotR (*ducks to avoid flying objects*) so I just have to pick up on what these fics are about.