So... using my own badfic as an example for the intelligence report...
This is a Department of Intelligence Report for the story http://kit-the-wolfy.deviantart.com/gallery/41378683
PPC Intelligence Report
Fic: Yu-Gi-Oh: Reverse over ZERO (original version) (http://kit-the-wolfy.deviantart.com/gallery/41378683)
Description: A VERY AU Yu-Gi-Oh story where Yugi Mutou and Seto Kaiba are dead. (Description is very basic)
Plot Holes: Many, many, many. Unresolved plots, beige prose, and a hefty dose of surrealism.
Problem Passages: WAY TOO MANY TO LIST
OC: (way, way too many, but protagonists listed) Leonidas McCloud, Leon Anderson, Lily Nora, Mia DuPar, Cyrus Lebarge, Clara Giuseppe, Kuma Tohru, James Noir, Haru Fulbright, Raymond Sleet
Type: Several are Mary-Sues, and some are bit characters.
Offenses Against Canon: It's an AU fic, uh... hm. Other than that... Mixing up magic systems improperly, injecting very inappropriate fetishes into the story (don't even ASK), spelling/grammar errors, Deus Ex Machina, idiotic writing, pissing off its own creator (yours truly), beige prose, Mary-Sue-ism, inept crossovers, stupid lines, switching between different moods inappropriately, random Author's Notes, etc.
Additional Comments: EXTREMELY BIZARRE/SURREAL. Handle with caution.
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