Subject: Nice, Nice! How's this?
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Posted on: 2016-01-12 01:05:00 UTC

That was amazing, so much better than mine. Here it is.


My idea was that Sauron considered bending them to his will, but also thought about the drawbacks of having all his power in a central object. Instead, he decides to occupy huge swathes of land, as normal. Ar-Pharazon objects, captures him, and Sauron manages to sink Numenor, the world is Bent, and Elendil swears vengeance. Meanwhile, Celebrimbor realizes that Elven power will not last forever, and decides to create objects that could stop that process. He creates three prototype rings, and gives them to his love, Galadriel and Gil-Galad, ruler of the elves. Sadly, Sauron kills him before he could perfect this art. The prototype rings could only vastly slow down the elven aging process, not stop it in it's tracks. Galadriel chooses to set up her own elven kingdom of Lothlorien, while Gil-Galad keeps the other two. He later chooses to give Vilya to Elrond, so that he could form Rivendell.

Years pass, and the threat of Sauron still looms in Mordor. Elendil has his children, Anarion and Isildur. They each inherit on half of the fathers kingdom, and thus Arnor and Gondor are formed. Over time, Numenorean tensions rise. There are only so many Numenorean families you could marry into, and so Gondor loses Umbar to Castamir's descendants, over Eldacar's blood purity. Meanwhile, with Gondor between them and Mordor, Arnor becomes much more laid-back as a state. A clash between three brothers changes that. Arnor is split between Cardolan, Arthedain and Rhudaur. Rhudaur was formed as a more militaristic Arnor, and Arthedain split off because of the arrival of the hobbits, who Cardolan wanted nothing to do with. After all, they were a peaceful group, and would do nothing much for the fragments of Arnor. Over time, Arthedain would rejoin Cardolan to combat the threat of Rhudaur, which was taken over by Sauron's spies. Time passes, and there is relative stability. The Kingdoms prosper, but Sauron remains over their heads.

I understand that there are a lot of details that I have not touched on, but this is everything I have fully thought out. Do you think "If Sauron didn't make the ring" is a good writing prompt?

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