Subject: I've been considering making a thread about this. ^_^
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Posted on: 2015-12-17 10:09:00 UTC

In preparation for a new project, I've had to come up with a whole slate of new characters - I need a cast of 14 (!!!), and only two of them are pre-existing. So I've had ample opportunity to observe exactly how I invent them!

What I've discovered is that my characters tend to come into existence not as a single idea, but by the combination of two. These ideas tend to be:

-Species/origin.
-Personality.
-Role in the PPC.
-Backstory.

So, for instance, one character is a Thomas the Tank Engine train. That's idea number one, but it doesn't inform an entire character. Combine that with a job description that keeps it in one place the whole time, though, and a character starts to come together: one who's dedicated enough to keep working on the same thing even though their entire life is contained in a single loop of track, and who is probably a little too geeky.

Another pair of characters came together from the manner of their arrival in the PPC, and the fact that they are two members of the same group of friends, but never really got on themselves - but are now stuck working together. I don't yet know the precise details of their personality conflict - I suspect that the first lines of their story will give me one, and the other will grow to bounce off them - but I have the clay I need to start with.

Know what's entirely missing from this, though? Things like the following:

-Name.
-Sex and gender.
-Appearance.

Those are pretty much the last things that need to be stuck on a character. At the moment, only three of my characters have genders - two of them are the preexisting ones, and the third is a fictionalised historical person. Two of those are the only ones with names. I have no idea what the ones outside that trio look like. At least one doesn't even have a species assigned yet!

Because those things... really are unimportant, despite the fact that people think of them as the first thing they need. If you asked me to write Dafydd Illian as a warty-skinned squat alien named Kzarth (who belongs to the fourth sex of yer species, which has seven), I could do that easily: the essential 'utterly convinced of yer own superiority, but not that of yer people necessarily' would be easy to pull through. But ask me to write the tall son of Feanor Dafydd Illian as a shy introvert? I couldn't do it; I'd be writing a completely different character.

Your agent already has one idea: they need to be a partner to your other one. Find a second idea. Maybe there's a species ["NOT TIME LORD!" ~ Morgan] you always wanted to play with. Maybe you can find them a backstory in the PPC - perhaps they used to work in a defunct department, or they've just transferred from Infrastructure to Action, or they were involved in the Macrovirus epidemic and have had intense germophobia ever since. Maybe (because there are exceptions to every rule) you can come up with a name that means things in half a dozen languages, and want to make a running joke out of that. All of these things can inform and plant the seed of a personality.

hS

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