Subject: I like this
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Posted on: 2015-11-17 10:03:00 UTC

But I found a typo.
Falchion realized that one of her hands as a prosthetic ...
Should be "was".

Right away, the waitress attending the table gave all of them their menus and silverware, and Falchion began studying his with an absent-minded expression.
When I read this, I first thought that a word is missing after Falchion began studying his. But then I realized that the sentence would work in German (capitalizing and deflecting the German equivalent of his to make it a noun); so reflecting to Falchion’s menu like this may be legitimate? It still looks unfamiliar to me.

HG

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